Aaj Tu

[DareDreamer]

aaj to be-sabab udaas hai jii


aaj to be-sabab udaas hai jii
ishq hotaa to ko_ii baat bhii thii

jaltaa phirtaa huu. kyuu. do-pehro. me.
jaane kyaa chiiz kho ga_ii merii

vahii. phirataa huu. mai. bhii Khaak ba-sar
is bhare shahar me. hai ek galii

chhupataa phirataa hai ishq duniyaa se
phailatii jaa rahii hai rusvaa_ii

ham_nashii. kyaa kahuu. ke vo kyaa hai
chhor ye baat niind urney lagii

aaj to vo bhii kuchh Khaamosh saa thaa
mai.n ne bhii us se ko_ii baat na kii

ek dam us ke hont chuum liye
ye mujhe baiThe baiThe kyaa suujhii

aik dam uss kaa haath chor diya
janey kiya baat darmian aayi

tuu jo itanaa udaas hai 'Nasir'
tujhe kyaa ho gayaa bataa to sahii

[Resilience]

This is simply a masterpiece!!!

[DareDreamer]

Resilience! I read your poetry and the style reflects a few colors that this great poet emits. And guess what?....this guy has almost got the same birthdate as yourself.....
And do share your opinion if we shud put poetry in Roman English as not everyone can read the "urdu script"

[Resilience]

Yes!! I think we should!!! it s a good idea.

[Resilience]

And thank you for the complement, I would consider myself a Gifted if i could write one line like great Nasir Kazmi...

[DareDreamer]

I hope this style of urdu and roman english script is going to suit everyone.
And hey , there should not be any compliments or thanks from any side. We are here to encourge whatever talent we are born with, regardless of how good we are in what we are doing. We accept each other unconditonally and remain comitted as a team.